Chapter 15

Will need a lot of revising. I had a hard time focusing on this chapter because of the scattered feelings that the character feels. I was able to focus  little toward the end, but the for a bout 3-4 pages things felt muggy and shadowed. Thankfully I was able to get through it. A lot of secrets were revealed in 15 so it's very dialog heavy. Also my protagonist and a supporting character got much closer. I may need to go back and scale it down a bit as it may, to some readers, put to much of a story shift and cause people to think about what may be really happening here. There was also the introduction of another supporting character who on the surface is an extremely greedy person, however as the story unfolds they develop into a truly great friend to one of the characters. Chapter 16 will see a small style shift and within this part of the book, the holiday season will be played out. It should make for good drama for those who love a good juicy story.